Molly's {Horrible} Writing of a Story.

[Molly has a Mini Fridge.]

Ok. So some of you may know that I write stories...well this is true. But Sadly i haven't been able to update them and I usually give up on them after the 5th chapter. But I thought what they hey, I can put it up here just to see what they think of it. Now I know before you say it: THIS. IS. HORRIBLE. Please, please if you think its bad, just tell me what You think I should improve on in a productive way. No bashing please. That makes me feel like crap and I get into a funk and do not write anything for a long while. Alrighty. Here is a link to the story I currently have muse for. There are spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and the sort. I a currently looking for a BETA and if you are interested, PM me. I will also post it here if it's easier.

The Technicolor Dream Phase

McKayla (m) POV

I check the mirrored image of myself. My cleavage isn't right. I add another tank top under my V-neck shirt. there now it looks like I've got something. I think to myself getting ready for my date with Andre. Andre was my first boyfriend. I had to do what he wanted me to. I couldn't be called a prude because it was my last year in middle school.

I live in Miami, Florida. But my pale skin and freckled face have nothing to show for it. I don't like the sun... I never did. I always got a sun burn and they hurt like hell. so I try and avoid being outside as long as possible. except today.

I told Andre i needed help with my science and he was more than willing to help. he said we should go to the park. except the park was about a half an hour away from my house. Everyone was busy with something, except my dads girlfriend.

"Sandra, can you do me a HUGE favor?" I begged almost crying at the thought of her saying no.

"it depends on the favor Hun."

"well I was wondering if you could drive me to sugar sand park. its not that far. I'm getting tutoring there. please?"

"OK. but whats the real reason you want to go?" Sandra always tried to weasel things out of me so she could go tell my father. but I knew if didn't tell her she wouldn't take me.

"Well I wanted to go see Andre and we aren't dating yet and i needed help with science. he offered to help. but he can only go to Sugar Sand." i finished with a deep breath, almost gasping.

I had just told her the reason hopefully she wouldn't tell my dad... god i hope she doesn't.

"yea I guess I can take ya." she finished the conversation with a long drag on her cigarette. Before I knew it I was already in the park. but this time we were studying science in a new way, experimenting.

we started kissing and before we understood what was happening, i was onto of him on the under ground playground with the standee farm animals. my bag on the side of me about 2 feet away. this was my first kiss. but I wasn't thinking about the boy that was sitting in front or should I say beneath me. I was thinking of my child hood best friend.

[[[[ALERT--PG-13 MATERIAL--]]]]

I try and wipe the thought out of my mind and enjoy the moment. Andre pulled my V-neck shirt even lower than normal and started to caress my breast, run his hand over my nipple. but he stops and fixes my shirt. he moves down to my jean short shorts, grabs the thong I was wearing and pushes me closer to him and his hardness growing under his jeans.

[[[[----END OF PG-13 MATERIAL---]]]]

I guess I was just in the moment like I wanted to be. we continued to kiss and then something in my mind told me to say his name. with out thinking anything. I moan into Andre's mouth "Colin"

one simple word can ruin everything you have in a second.

I didn't know if he knew what I said, but I sure did. I quickly found I have three text messages from Sandra saying she was ready to go. I try and get up but he grabs me by my waist.

"where you going babe?" he asked in a husk voice.

"Sandra needs to take me home. I will see you on Monday." I quickly peck him on the lips and leave with him staring at me, well the back of me, as I jog away from the first sign that I was truly mistaken about something. later that month I searched for My-used-to-be best friend, Colin McLove

I found pictures of us when we were little. me with my curly hair and freckled face and him with his peach fuzz hair and goofy smile. god I miss him.

I had no clue where he lived so I couldn't look in a phone book. he moved away when we were in second grade. he moved away and I couldn't handle things that reminded me of him so I changed schools and moved to Miami from Fort Lauderdale.

I wonder if he still even remembers me. hopefully, I've remembered him all these years.

I wonder if he has changed.

Horrible right? Tell me what'cha think!
Molly

[Molly has a Mini Fridge.]

Just to pt this out here. I usually do NOT count these as chapters, more like little bits to a big puzzle. So there isn't a set amount of items I will have. Feel free to respond to this.

CPOV (Colin)

I look out my fog covered back porch. I see Sam and Emily making goo goo eyes at each other near the camp fire pit. Pain strikes me as I see everyone with their imprint: Kim and Jared, Paul and Rachel, Jacob and Renesme, Brady and Sasha, and the rest. Today is another day in the arms of your lover. except I sit alone, out in what would be the cold for everyone but with my high body temperature it didn't seem like it at all.

Fog hung low on the ground, clouds colored the gray sky. I sit on my porch swing, quietly swaying back and fourth. There hasn't been any vampires-besides Nessie- around, so there has been no need to phase. Everyone except Jacob, Brady and I stopped. Jared would a phase every once and a while and come to check on us. But now that Sam is not the alpha there isn't a real leader. Well, Jacob. But everyone cares so much about their imprint they honestly don't care about positions in the Pack.

Being the last to phase was kind of hard. everyone else was already so big and muscled, hot (blooded) and tall. I remember in second grade when I moved to La Push.

FLASH BACK:

My mother, father and I drove to a rickety, crummy old house next to a sign that said 'welcome to La Push!' my mom said this was the best place they could find at the last moment. I didn't understand why we had to move here. I have never even heard of this place.

This was on the total other side of the country from Florida. Imagine moving from Sunny wonderful Florida to Glummy rainy dull Washington.

yeah your right... I almost died. At first no one would talk to me in school because I was different. I was pale, with blonde hair, freckles, and this goofy grin. since everyone had a dark tan and jet black hair you can imagine how much I stood out.

No one excepted me like they did when I was back in Florida. But I soon began to make friends with this kid named Brady, he seemed nice enough. he was the only one in my grade that actually looked at me like I was normal. But I guess to him I was, little did I know I would soon become his pack brother.

After my middle school years my memories of Florida started to fade. I became a Freshman in High school and my whole world changed. I had become a werewolf.

END FLASH BACK

The only thing I remember about Florida was a little girl about my age and had curly blonde hair, freckles and pale skin. We looked the same but I always thought she was pretty. But I could never remember her name. When I ask my parents they get this far away look in their eyes like they are missing something. I think she may have been my sister. Maybe my twin. I'm not sure. but since I cant figure out what her name is and my parents wouldn't tell me, I was in a pickle. mmmm pickle that sounds good.

I got up off the swing and into the house making my way to the over stocked refrigerator. I find what I was looking for, the giant jar of sweet pickles. After eating 10 I knew that if I ate anymore, I couldn't eat 7 burgers.

RING RING RING!

I take out my cell phone and answering, knowing already it was Brady telling me it was time to patrol. Since my parents weren't home I left them a note telling them I would be out for a bit.

Brady:
I went out with the guys, call me if u need anything or whatever. only emergencies please this time.

i grab my elastic cord and tie my clothes around it once I get to the back porch. I feel my bones shifting under my skin forming me into this creature, hair starting to grow again. I start running into the forest to meet the guys.

hey dude! we have been waiting for you forever! what took so long?, Brady always does this-always teases me. But its not like I care 'cause we will always be best friends.

Yeah I no right! So you still thinking about Curls? Dude she lives over 7,000 miles away. Not like your ever going to see her again. I mean there has to be a reason why your parents didn't tell you about her. So just cool the thoughts. Every time I think about her-curls is what everyone calls her cause no one knows her name- he always gives me this lecture.

GUYS! SHUT UP! I called you out because we have smelt blood suckers around the border and they aren't the usual. Jacob never screams unless its something serious.

I immediately shut my mind or should I say thoughts. But this was strange there hasn't been a vampire around since the Volturi Clan.

Why do all the vamps wanna fight us. Its not like I mind but really, its not fair to the others. They wanna spend time with their imprints and Vamps waste their time.

Guys just tell everyone else so they can get together, I will follow the tracks. Jake get Nessie, Brady get Sasha.

Jake was the first to respond, you know I call the shots. He chuckled playing around just make sure you follow 'em good.

you got it. Jake was out of my mind right after.

Brady, go on man, I got this.

Brady didn't say anything but was also out of my mind. Finally I get to have my mind to myself again.

[Molly has a Mini Fridge.]

MPOV

Sitting in the middle of the living room floor. i had spread out all these photos from their albums with the years on them. from 1994-2001

i started to see a pattern. i was always in pictures with what looked to be like a blonde haired, freckled, goofy smiling young boy- Colin.

i didnt have time to question why before my mother came into the living room holding a glass of apple juice for me. its what keeps me up at night.

"hey mom, i was thinking... does Colin still live here in Florida? for some reason i thought he moved like far away."

my mom had some look in her eye. it was hard to explain.

"well McKayla, Colin moved away while you were all together in second grade. i am not too sure why they had to move so abruptly but Susan-Colin's mom, didnt even tell me where. i havent even thought about them."

my mom hasnt forgoten about them either, thank god! i can finally tell her what i was thinking.

"mom how do you spell Colin or Susans last name? i can try and find them on Facebook or Myspace."

"well thats tough, it was a hard irish name to even say out loud im not sure how you spell it."

so now this is where my plan has gotten me into.

i remember when i moved i had a friend that me and Colin also grew up with, Shawn Clark.

logging onto my facebook, i look for Shawns name in the search engine.

FOUND HIM! I thought to myself.

i clicked add as friend and about five minutes later it said Shawn Clark has added you as a friend on Facebook

i decide this may be the only person that knows where he may be or how to spell his last name.

i type as fast as my little fingers would let me.

hi Shawn you probabaly dont rememeber me but i knew you when we were younger. hopefully you do because we need to catch up on a lot right? how has life been? still going to the same private skol? but i have a HUGE question to ask. but i want to make sure this accualy you and not some crazy person that has the same name as you. reply PLEASE!

i waited and waited until there was a message back:

Hey! yea this is accualy me. i still go to the same skol. its so boring i miss you guys so much! you left the same time as HE did. but yea ask away at the question. hahaha unless its to ask me out cause that would be wierd. lol

i giggled as i typed trying to message him back before he logs off again.

HAHAHA no its not to ask you out. and whos HE? do i know him?

i wanted to ask him about Colin but i want to regain his trust again before i ask.

WHOS HE? GOD I CANT BELIEVE YOU DONT REMEMEBER HIM! COLIN, YOU SHOULD REMEMEBER! YOU GUYS WERE NEVER SEPEPERATED! HAHAHA COME ON I KNOW YOU MUST HAVE GOTTEN SMARTER OVER THE YEARS GIRL! THINK Colin McLove. REMEMEBER NOW?

i stared at the computer. Shawn had given me all the information with out even knowing it.

ok ive got one more question, since you already answered my HUGE one. where did he run off to? and do you still talk to him? hahaha thats two im srry bad counting. lol

i wanted to try and get as much information from him as possible.

this was big news. i had just found my long lost best friend all because of Facebook! thank you facebook!

when i looked at the screen it said that Shawn had signed off and he didnt answer my last message. i decided to keep my facebook page up incase he came back on. by the time it was eleven at night, i shut down the computer, determined to turn it back on after i take a quick nap.

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i woke with a start around 6 am. i slept the whole night! crap. and today was a school day. ugh time to get up. i start to look around me.

this isnt my room where am i? I servey the area and find i was engulfed in pictures in the living room of my house. i grown as i stretch and im so stiff from falling asleep on the ground.

i only had ten minutes to get ready and meet my ride so i slip on my clothes, brush my hair and teeth and grab a granola bar.

once i stepped outside into the sunny streets of Miami, i remembered Andre... how was i going to tell him about Colin. Now that i think about it, i dont even have time for a boyfriend.

my friends pull up and i slide into the seat ready for the worst day so far in my life.

Ok. Horrible grammar, spelling, punctuation and the like. But I wanted to give the people who were demanding this, up. (: